Man - Good Job
Good thing I read fast and it still took a lot of time
I like the angles that you were coming from
Makes a good story without getting bogged down in things that aren't all that important
I appreciate the work that went into this
Again Good Job
Thanks a lot FriendoftheFamily and to tell you the truth I'm doing my best to avoid anything which is already known by the general public and I'm also trying to avoid it while working on the "angles" or on the "connections" between the stories. Don't worry I'll get even better
and thanks again