One thing that drives me nuts about Carlo's writing is that 90% of it is just repeating shit with different words. "The day was hot, sweltering, heat was in the air, and people were sweating." "He was a killer, a monster, a murderer, and he lusted for blood, to kill, to destroy!" Just get to the point!
Pitera might be a stone killer, but he knows a shitty writer when he sees one.
Last edited by stevapalooza; 04/30/13 03:01 AM.
