I've been away from this forum for quite awhile, mostly because I'm working on a new novel and I've been busy with research and writing and my day job. But I wanted to let you all know that it looks like I'll be able to make some corrections for the paperback edition, which will be out next year. So I can get rid of that embarrassing anachronism in the first paragraph and fix several other minor errors, like the Feast of San Rocco, not San Genarro (Thanks, Sonny!).
No problem. One last nitpicking detail; the screenplay of Part II states that Pentangeli was approaching his sixties, so he would be in his early thirties in 1933. Anyway, good luck with your new novel!
