Constructive Criticism?

Re: Constructive Criticism? [Re: FrankNitti91] #603131 05/16/11 01:34 PM 05/16/11 01:34 PM
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FrankNitti91 OP I Wiseguy Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 45 International	Thanks Geoff, can you take a look at the second scene of the chapter?

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Constructive Criticism?	FrankNitti91	05/13/11 09:19 PM
Feedback on my first chapter?	FrankNitti91	05/13/11 04:43 PM
Re: Feedback on my first chapter?	SC	05/13/11 04:59 PM
Re: Feedback on my first chapter?	FrankNitti91	05/13/11 05:19 PM
Re: Feedback on my first chapter?	olivant	05/13/11 05:57 PM
Re: Feedback on my first chapter?	FrankNitti91	05/13/11 06:05 PM
Re: Feedback on my first chapter?	FrankNitti91	05/13/11 06:45 PM
Re: Feedback on my first chapter?	FrankNitti91	05/13/11 06:45 PM
Re: Feedback on my first chapter?	J Geoff	05/14/11 04:31 AM
Constructive Criticism Pt2?	FrankNitti91	05/13/11 10:30 PM
Whenever one of youse guys or molls get a chance?	FrankNitti91	05/14/11 02:53 AM
Re: Constructive Criticism?	J Geoff	05/14/11 06:03 AM
Re: Constructive Criticism?	FrankNitti91	05/16/11 05:34 PM
Re: Constructive Criticism?	FrankNitti91	05/18/11 08:39 PM