To just come up with that on a wim, in my opinion is incredible.. PL you have all my respect for even trying and doing such a good job....I've tried to write short stories and I can't get past the first paragraph..it is a very hard thing to do to write something interesting, and I think you succeded in doing just that with even this ruff copy.........I don't know about everyone else, especially Dr. WFL, but I think you did an excellent job and I would have no problem buying the book if you ever finish it....
Keep it up