Great job, but watch those run on sentences. Some are long and windy. I wonder why.
Way better then I thought it would be. I enjoyed even this ruff draft.
Spend less time on Baseball and do more writing. Outline your work first.
and most important, don't let your head get big. You may just be penning a very popular piece of work!
ONLY gun owners have the POWER to PROTECT and PRESERVE our FREEDOM. "...it is their (the people's) right and duty to be at all times armed" - Thomas Jefferson, June 5, 1824
Everyone should read. "HOW TO KILL A MOCKING BIRD"
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You really don't expect people to believe your shit do you?
Read: "The Daily Apple"- Telling America and the Gangster BB like it really is!
I wonder why.
