Thank you Don Vito.
As mentioned in my previous posts, I have typed some more scenes, including the revised beginning. However, I got a little spooked when GFR came out and there were some faint rumors of a movie. Dont get me wrong, I trust the members of the BB, but anyone can get on and read this thing, and I'm a little paranoid that I'm going to go see GF4 and reconize a few of my scenes. I'm pronbably just being paranoid.
Will probably end up posting a few more excerpts from scenes by the end of the month thought