funny i read this for the first time yesterday...i thought it was pretty damn good actually.....i didnt like the fact that michael was with FIDEL CASTRO though...when ya think CASTRO is like the leader of a country....and would have FAR too much security for something like the car hit in your story......but apart from that i really liked the rest.....HOPEFULLY you can write all the way upto the 90's where MIKE dies and so on
