Originally posted by Don Noledge:
DISSOLVE TO:
INT.VINCENTS HOUSE – DAY
The VIEW slowly tracks towards Vincent's office doors.
INT.VINCENTS OFFICE – CONTINUOUS
The VIEW tracks over old photos from the Corleone Family history. We see Vito posed with his three sons. Michael and Kay and their children. Sonny, Fredo, Mary, Mama and Tom. We remember the Corleone family as it once was and now what it's become.
VIEW on Vincent sitting alone behind his desk. He stares in deep thought at the telephone in front of him. The call he could make will change his families' future forever. Slowly, he clasps his hands, leans forward and stares directly at us. His eyes filled with sorrow and despair.
FADE TO BLACK.
nolegdeExcellent view and excellently written. You should become a screenplay writer or director one day. Pity it was very short. So what was the phone call about.....you've already got me gripped. Or haven't you figured that out yet?
