Why flashback to GF I? We've all seen GF I! Flashing back to that is lazy writing, if you ask me - we all know what happened.

As a fan of the Trilogy, my main areas of interest are Michael, Sonny, Fredo, Tom, Vito... the Family, as it were. I never gave thought to Vito's father or how Vito became Don Vito because in a restrained, lyrical way FFC showed us the change in Vito in the GF II sequence. Why try to reinvent the wheel? It seems you're falling into the trap many others have fallen into - rehashing points and scenes from previous installments attempting to shed some more light or insight. How about something new?

I'm sorry I am so harsh. I have a script going now, and I'm scared to death of subjecting it to hte kind of scrutiny I am now giving yours. I commend you for the brass balls. Lemme know if I can help in any way.

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