Originally posted by Contento Tu:
Accept this post as constructive criticism, this is not an attack.
First and foremost, will there be an actual script? This is just an outline.
Second - there is just way too much going on here. It doesn't need to be this tidy, everybody doesn't have to be connected. It is not "Six Degrees of Vito Corleone". I agree, it's okay for characters to come from "out of the blue".
In a word, convoluted.
What's Convoluted, and what do you mean by Six Degrees of Vito Corleone. This is an outline, after i finish I'll cut what you guys don't like, and make a script. I'm upto 1941, and I'm going to be starting the Vincent era this week, any ideas? I've got allies, but NO CLUE as to enemies of the Corleone Family. a little help?
