This is an ending I wrote for a GF4. The story flashes back from modern day Vincent to old day Sonny, Vito etc. Anyway, the modern story is that Vincent is offered a way back into narcotics.

A deal which could either secure his families security for ever, all ultimately destroy everything. He is told by the person who made the offer to call him with his decision...

The format will probably get all screwed up, but what the hay:

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DISSOLVE TO:

INT.VINCENTS HOUSE – DAY

The VIEW slowly tracks towards Vincent's office doors.

INT.VINCENTS OFFICE – CONTINUOUS

The VIEW tracks over old photos from the Corleone Family history. We see Vito posed with his three sons. Michael and Kay and their children. Sonny, Fredo, Mary, Mama and Tom. We remember the Corleone family as it once was and now what it's become.

VIEW on Vincent sitting alone behind his desk. He stares in deep thought at the telephone in front of him. The call he could make will change his families' future forever. Slowly, he clasps his hands, leans forward and stares directly at us. His eyes filled with sorrow and despair.

FADE TO BLACK.



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