The GFIV general idea:

My script is this: Sonny's time would be Ricardo's outline(nobody can go avgainst it ).

The Vincent saga would take place from 1984 to 1997.

Vincent Corleone is the head of the most powerful organization in America. Gambling, horsetracks and some bordellos operated by a semi-renegade capo named Antonio DiNardesi. DiNardesi had been operating with drugs and had traded with the dreaded invading cartels that are gaining control over the Sicilians. The Russians, Mexicans, Japanese and Colombians had been fighting for the control.
Is 1984, Vincent is celebrating the baptism of his son, Vittorio Corleone, in St. Patrick's cathedral. Friends and relatives are asking favors to the Don, who had straightned out after Mary's death. He married Charlotte Andania(Sicilian father and American m other) a year ago. She's a beautiful woman, an activist. His father is a powerful movie producer of Holywood.
Vincent is having a good day, but his Underboss, sixty-nine years old, Albert "Al the Lion"(Familiar? ) Neri had given him bad news: DiNardesi had left the family and with Crocefisso Barzini, head of the Barzinis, who had made an alliance with a Sicilian middleman who has a proposition from the invading cartels.
Vincent is mad as hell, but calms down. Neri informs him, that Vincent's half brother, Santino Jr., had ask him a request. Santino wants to be a member of the organization. This is nothing new to Vincent: Sonny had been make his reputation as a shooter.

Darts. Lunch's over. Gotta go. I will continue tommorow.

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First of all, you don't have to make it a two story thing... you can just as well make it a Vincent story all on itself or something.

And as for Ricardo's thing, it wasn't finished... I myself extrapalated (what a word) it for use in my own outline. The parts Ricardo did are now only 25% of my old story, I think.

OK Pherdy. I will post the Vito's parts too. I will post it as soon is possible...tomorrow.

Giorgio Luigi Gambino.

O.K. I will start again with ACT 1
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ACT 1: 1984

Vincent Corleone is celebrating the baptism of his firstborn child, Santino Vittorio, on St. Patrick's cathedral. His wife is Carlota Taylor a well known actress and a fund raiser to create organizations for child care. They had been married for a year and two months; the daughter of a powerful Hollywood producer---Charles Taylor---and a legendary Italian actress---Ana Maria Loretta. Carlota and Vincent met during a campaign for a new organization specialized in the care homage for the orphan in America. The Corleone had being major contributors for such charity foundation.
Vincent had suffered for Mary's dead and the retirement of Michael Corleone to Sicily didn't help in any way. But after three years Vincent felt in love again. The wedding took place a year after they met.
To the baptism came the major figures from Vegas and Hollywood...and also came the most important members and associates to the Corleone.
Fifty-nine year old underboss Albert Neri came with two of grand-nephews; Nicolas Vandonni, Michael Graziella's---Vincent's more important ally in Sicily---capo. Vandonni represented Graziella who was attended business in Palermo. Michael had lived under Graziella's protection, who had inherited Don Tommasino's power; along came Mario Casso, the Stracci's underboss. The Five Families had maintained peace for the last years, and the relations with the Corleone where improving, although Stefan DiCassio, the Don of Cuneo and Don Alessandro Barzini, Don of the Barzini were testing the Corleone's empire, and the Tattaglias were the next threat. Anyway, the enforcers of the families came and congratulate the couple; also came Alfred Dennison, manager of one of the Vegas' casinos; Armand Gacenno, the enforcer of the Bronx enclave came too; also, Richard Clemenza II, grandson of Peter, was the capo in Bronx and came too; Salvatore Rafael Tessio, the capo in Brooklyn. The Tessio family had hold the grudge against Michael for Tessio's death, but when the new Vincent regime came in 1980, Sal Tessio had being working for the Barzini's but left after hearing Vincent's proposition, Sal left the organization. The Barzini's were a dissapointment and their administration a complete mess. Tessio was a brilliant capo who would had being wasted if he had being still with the Barzinis.
From the Corleone blood family came Connie and his sons, Michael Francis Rizzi and Victor; the brothers Frank, Santino Jr., Francesca and Kathryn and the Hagens, Frnak and his sister---Andrew would conduct the Mass. Also, sixty-six year old Johnny Fontane, B.J. Harrison and Dom Abbandando and his family came.
Also, came Augustus Gaetano Corleone, Vito's nephew. Augustus---born in 1921---was the Corleone contact with the foreign cartels of the Russians, Colombians, Japanese and Mexicans.*
After the baptism, the party took place at the old Corleone compund that was being restored. People came to ask favors and Vincent held a brief business meeting. Clemenza, Tessio, Augustus, Neri, Gacenno, Harrison and Abbandando to attend some issues. First, Clemenza and Tessio would soft the security on their territories. It wasn't neccesary such security in a time of piece; B.J. Harrison would live in Colombia as a representant of the Corleone. His services as a lawyer were going to be minimal for the moment; Abbandando would not be the advisor, he will now be the representative in Rome in the Immobiliare investments. Altough Harrison and Abbandando weren't prepared for the orders, they obeyed. Vincent then presented the new Consiglieri, Frank Hagen who had worked as a Corleone lawyer in Vegas since 1976. Hagen---German, Irish and Sicilian---was a capable counselor.
Augustus was discussing with Vincent a proposition from the Cartels; the heads of powerful Russian, Colombian, Japanese and Mexican cartels made an offer to the Families: The Families will give space to the cartels' operations on their territories and they would need financing. In exchange, the Families will receive a thirty percent of the year results. Such offer would appeal the other Families, but not Vincent, who angrily refused to Augustus. Augustus tried to convince him, with the help of Neri, but Vincent snapped. He will not give his territory for the Cartels' enterprise. Augustus then talked about finance and politics with the meeting. He warned that the FBI was getting his nose more deeply into the operations. The new administration was dangerous. He remembered Vincent to be careful reminding him of Vito's early management to the Family. Vincent nodded and asked Augustus to stay. Augustus said “no” because he had business to attend.
Vincent danced with his wife and attended the crowd. Politicians were present.
Later on, Connie ask Vincent a request. Vincent said that he would do anything for her. Victor Rizzi had been the manager of the New Italy Casino, serving as an indirect underling. Victor was a capable administrator and an excellent finance man. Vincent said yes, although he had to discuss it with Neri and the capos.
Then, Vincent's half-brother, Santino Jr., came with Neri. Neri told him that Santino had came because he wanted to join Vincent and the organization. Vincent told him that he heard of his reputation as a brawler in Miami and Tampa Beach. He had apartments in both cities and lived with his wife and two children where he worked as a protection collector in the hotels. But Santino gambled and fight too much. He beat a man almost to death over a poker game. Santino was plainly ashamed and he asked his brother for a chance. Vincent told him that the would stay close to him. Santino would move his family to the house once owned by Sonny in the compound and stay closer to Vincent. Sonny Jr. Kissed Vincent's hand but Vincent told him that they were brothers and that he didn't have to act in the old fashion.
Then, Stefan Joey DiNardesi burst into the office. DiNardesi was the Corleone capo in Manhattan and had being showing signs of insubordination. He traded more pounds of drugs that surpased the Family's patron. DiNardesi acussed Vincent of the destruction of a drug storage in Staten Island. The storage was burned to shambles by Tessio's regime. He said that pissed in the Corleone's power and that he leaved the Family.
Santino didn't tolerate the man's insults and beat him. Neri and Clemenza had to restrain Santino. DiNardesi spat at Vincent's shoe and leaved the office.
At the end of the party, Vincent went to his bedroom where he slept with his wife. Later, Vincent raised off the bed and went to his son's bedroom. The kid laying asleep on his cradle. Vincent kisses his son. The screen says on Vincent's face:

Vincent Corleone
Long Beach, New York
1984

Comments? O.K. I will post the Corleone organization of Vincent. Give ten minutes and I will post Act II.
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CORLEONE ORGANIZATION

The Corleone organization in Vincent's regime and their rackets are explained here.

Don: Vincent Corleone(1949) Head of the Corleone Family organization, capable administrator and wartime leader. His business are gambling, race bets, bookmaking, construction firm, real estate, waste management, weapon traffic, National Imports and 10% of each of the gang's drug trade.
UNDERBOSS: : Albert “Al” Neri(1925) Underboss since 1980, Capo(1955-1972) and Bodyguard(1952-1955). Executor and experienced Corleone member. Deals with weapon traffic and the regulations of Drug trade.
CONSIGLIERI: Frank Hagen(1938) Consiglieri(1980). Capable lawyer and with some Sicilian cunning from his mother.
CAPO 1: Richard Clemenza II(1938) Peter Clemenza's grandson. Capo(1968-1972 and 1980-) Fierce warrior and administrator. Capo in Bronx and Staten Island. Manages sport bets, race bets and waste managements.
CAPO 2: Salvatore Rafael Tessio(1936) Sal Tessio's nephew. Brilliant tactician. Capo in New Jersey and Brooklyn. Deals with gambling and the construction firm.
CAPO 3: CAPO 4: Stefan Josephn DiNardesi(1941) Gun-toting capo. Controls gambling, prostitution and Truck exports in Manhattan and Atlantic City.
*Santino Jr. Corleone(1945) Took over DiNardesi's regime in 1984. Also represents the Corleones in Florida.
CAPO 4: Victor Rizzi(1946) The Capo in Nevada. Manages Casino Hotels.
LIEUTENANT 1 Armand Gacenno. Enforcer, first with Tessio(1980-81), then with Clemenza(1981-1984) and then with Santino Jr.

Now I will proceed to tell Augustus Corleone's biography.

ASSOCIATE : Augustus Gaetano Corleone(1921) Son of a cousin of Antonio Andolini, Gaetano was born in Palermo, his family hidden from Don Ciccio's power. After Ciccio's dead in 1925, The Andolinis returned to their homeland. But three months later after Ciccio's death, Gaetano's family went to New York, where Augustus' father worked for Vito. Gaetano was very close to Vito, Tessio, Clemenza and specially Pentangeli who told him about the Roman Glorious' days. Pentangeli named him Augustus in honor of Emperor Augustus Caesar. From that day on he called himself Augustus. When he was twnety-four he returned to Sicily as an emmisary with Don Tommasino. He returned briefly in 1956, in Nevada to report with Michael. Until 1959, Michael offered him the rank of capo of Rocco's regime. He fulfill it until 1972, became Michael went legitimate. He retired and traveled thru the world. Until 1980, when Vincent named him ambassador of the Corleones. He is a charming and cunning man.

The Corleone organization is well organized with its proper layers. Although Vincent refused Augustus request from the Cartels, Vincent lets some small time hoods deal with drugs in small pieces of street, though he isn't directly linked with them.

ACTS

1.1984
2.1927,1928,1930
3.1986,1987
4.1931-1932
5.1992
6.1935-1937
7.1995
8.1938
9.1997

O.K. Herre is Act II. This will be all for today. Maybe I will post the next one. between sunday and wednesay.
Enjoy and give m=me your opinions!
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ACT II: 1927-1929

In a sunny Monday day, Vito Corleone and his wife Carmella celebrated their fifteen years of marriage. To the party came friends, family and associates. Vito, Carmella and their kids were celebrating in a ball room. The Abbandandos were there; Peter Clemenza, his wife and son; Sal Tessio and his family; Thomas Hagen Sr. And his son, Tom. Tom Hagen was a friend of Sonny's and his father was a good friend of Vito's.
In another table, Hyman Rothstein sat with his brother Samuel and his friends Gian Alfredo Olaneso and Moses Elias Greenebaum. Rothstein managed a gaming place with his brother Sam. Olaneso was a half Sicilian, half Jewish twenty-year older who collected the bets. Greenebaum was half Jewish, half Sicilian boy too who had a good mind for bet dealings.
Rothstein was talking with them. Sam, Olaneso and Greenebaum wanted to join the Oil Business of Vito's. Rothstein was going to talk with Vito.
Vito gave a brindis. Carmine Coppola played for Vito who remembered his father. Then, one of Clemenza's Lieutenants, Francesco Pentangeli, singed and danced for Vito along with Clemenza. Carmella sang.
Vito talked a moment with Clemenza, Tessio and Genco about business. Tessio says that some guys wanted to talk with Vito about an offer with the company's trucks. Vito said to Genco that he should arrange a meeting for the next two days.
Clemenza then said that Rothstein wanted to talk with Vito. Vito accepted. Rothstein asked Vito about admitting Sam, Olaneso and Greenenbaum more directly. Vito smiled and said that they had a job and that they will present themselves in the Genco offices in two days.
The Rothstein brothers, Olaneso and Greenebaum were happy.
Thomas Hagen Sr. Came with Vito and asked him for his protection. The Irish Gangs of Seamus Fitzpatrick and the McBurn's brothers were joining up with some Italian rogues. The Gangs were bitter for the Corleone power and knowing about Hagen's friendship with Vito they could kill him. Vito promised his friend that he would help him.
When the party was over, Vito and his family had a small party in the house.
Two days later, Vito, Clemenza, Tessio, Genco and Pentangeli sat at the entrance of the porch. Rothstein was inside the offices. Connie was playing with Fredo and two Abbandando girls at the sidewalk. Santino Corleone, Thomas Hagen Jr., Michael and six-year-old Augustus Corleone were sitting in a bench near the adults.
Pentangeli holded an history book while he discussed about creating a organization based upon the Roman Empire. Young Tom, Michael and Gaetano were interested, but Sonny wasn't that much, a thing that annoyed Vito.
Pentangeli told him about the Capos and the Regimes. Vito was highly interested and said that he would arrange that at once.
Gatano talked a little with Pentangeli about Roman History until Clemenza brought the affair of the Rothsteins and his friends. Pentangel---who had not being informed---protested angrily calling the Rothstein gang “A bunch of fucking Jews!” Vito shut him.
Then, two cars arrive at the office. Seven men appeared. One of the men was Joe Masseria. The other men were his partners.
Masseria make his offer: He wanted at least six of his importation trucks to smuggle mollases from Canada. Although Masseria used an intimadating tone, Vito eagerly accepted. He said that he would give some of his men to help. The men were going to be the Rothsteins, Olaneso, Greenebaum and Pentangeli for the job.

January, 1928. Weeks after the Anniversary , Santino came with young Hagen. Sonny said to his father that Hagen's mother had died and his father had disspeared after a night on a bar. His sister was taken away. Vito---moved by the affair---sended Tessio for information. Tom Hagen Sr. Was founded under a bridge, with a shot between the ear and the eye.
Tom stayed with the Corleones. Vito searched for Tom's sister but she had being already adopted. Later, Vito knew that the dead of Hagen was caused by a man of McBurn. A day later, one of the McBurn brothers---Logan---was shot to dead near an alcohol depot. The McBurns' tought of this as a robbing. McBurn's pocket were empty.

1930. The same week, Salvatore Maranzano talked to Vito about business. Maranzano wanted Vito to join him. Maranzano said that Masseria's ways were disorganized and primitive.
Vito said that he had an arrangement with Masseria and he couldn't broke it. Maranzano left the office, angry.

A week later, The Corleones were in Carson City, at the invitation of a contact in there, to celebrate New Year. They met Counselor Geary, the Woltz brothers---Jack and Arnold---who were creating a movie studio. Vito talked with Anthony Molinari and Frank Falcone, the men who ruled the West Coast. Vito met Joseph Zaluchi---who was playing drink gmaes with Clemenza---, Carlo Tramonti, Fernando Marianno and Vincent Forlenza, both who were talking with Genco and Tessio. Vito, Genco and the Capos were surprised to known that Zaluchi, Tramonti and Forlenza were capos in Michigan, Cleveland and Boston to Maranzano. They were also interested that the Capone's capos were close associates to Maranzano.
But Zaluchi, Tramonti and Forlenza were reliable people and didn't showed signs of rivaltry.
At 3:30 A.M. Something happened. Vito was summoned to speak to Marianno as an invitation in his suite. Vito went accompanied by Greenebaum and Sam Rothstein. He told them to stay outside.
At the same time, Pentangeli was playing cards with Clemenza, Tessio, Abbandando, Hyman and three men who worked as bodyguards for Marianno in a bar a block away. Two of the men said that they would leave the game. The other man did not.
Finally, Pentangeli won the card game but the bodyguard refused to pair.
At the same time, Vito was beated by three men. They took a garrote, but at the same time, Sam and Greenebaum burst in the door and shot two men. The other one tried to escape but was wounded in a leg.
In the bar, the men heared the gunshots and ran to the hotel, knowing that Vito was there.
The bodyguard tried to escape from the group but was shot in the street by Frankie.
Vito was alive. They interrogated the surviving bodyguard. Maranzano had send him. Pentangeli killed the bodyguard right away.
When they returned to New York, they saw with horror how the major olive oil storage in the city owned by Vito was being burning.
They killed the fire, but Masseria's pathetic ways of security were a dissapointment to Vito.
In1931, the Castellamarense war began.

I read the entire outline and it sounds pretty good so far. However I do not have enough time to read all of your work so far. I will post more later. THUG
P.S. All should read the outline because it is good and the work probably is too.

It's late. I'm tired. My brain does not process written words well but I will give you my opinion as of 4 am nov. 10, 2002. I enjoyed act 1 a lot. I thought it was well written. Act 2 was ok but was not as good as act 1. I will re-read it tommorow at a decent time to see if I can help more. THUG

Sleep Thug. Maybe Don Mikey, Pherdy and others could see this. I'm thinking about Act. III and I will post it in a couple of days.

Giorgio Luigi Gambino.

P.S. I will improve Act II if it is not so good as Act I

I really like Act II. I like the idea of showing how everything ended up the way it was. Great so far. Please... do an Act III.

I've been slacking off on my own GF4. Thanks for some inspiration.

Keep it up!

Man I re-read it I like 1 a lot but I really like Act 2! It was way too late last time but you do not need to change it! Please make act 3!

I'm glad you like it. I wrote Act III yesterday. It has more conspirations and suspense than ever!. Enjoy!
P.S. Don Mikey I send you a private message, answer me!

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ACT III: 1987-1989

Vincent Corleone has been appearing in public places along his wife. He is one of America's most powerful men .
Santino Jr. Took over DiNardesi's regime after he left for the Barzinis. DiNardesi had being pushing over the enclaves he formerly controlled; shooting down whorehouses' managers and destroying gambling places. Is war, and Vincent knew it.
Victor Rizzi moved to the Mall with his mother; Santino Jr. Moved with his wife and sons and Frank Hagen moved in too.
Santino Jr. Was very close to Al Neri, now in his early sixties. Neri told him yarns of the old days under Vito and Michael's regimes. The stories of Luca Brasi---the Capone's gunmen deaths, Luca's baby, the bandleader story--- and other stories about Santino's father. Santino loved those stories but sometimes he didn't trust Neri much; Brasi and Sonny were before his time and Al was getting older each day. Neri told him about one about his friends, Rocco Lampne, killed in a mssion against Hyman Roth.
Victor Rizzi had problems with his wife, whored a little and went to night clubs. One of those days, two gunmen came to one of the clubs were Victor was and opened fire. Victor was wounded in the leg, leaving him with a limp.
The men were Discanio men. Discanio was the Cuneo Don, a close ally to the Barzinis. Vincent didn't doubt that Don Barzini had given himmen of DiNardesi's regime.
Vincent turned his men loose. Wiping out the Barzini and Cuneo operations of New York with brutality. DiNardesi was the capo in charge to blocade the Corleone men. He did. The papers showed photographs of Corleone men slaughtered, but men of Cuneo and Barzini were present too.
The man who reported most of the Corleone war was a man named Jeff Jennings, an excentric man well known for his abilities to pour more gasoline to the fire. Jennings' abilities attracted a branch of the Senate who sended one of their best lawyers, Daniel Matthews. Togheter, they wrote stories about Vincent Corleone. They bought Corleone insiders for information and put togheter evidence, althought it was not sufficient for a hearing. The dangerous blow came when Jennings and Matthews tried to bought Santino Jr. And Neri, in exchange for a shorter prison term. Neri turned them down coldly, but Santino showed his anger by beating Matthews until he was restrained by Neri and two other Button Men. Jennings tried with Victor, but Victor turned him down too. Victor held one of the highest positions in the organization and he didn't want it to screw it up so easily like his father.
In a conference, Hagen informed Vincent that Jennings were receiving money from a middle-man of Cuneo. Vincent was angered. Tessio informed him that DiNardesi was going for a trip to Detroit in his private jet for a finance conference. The informant was the co-pilot himself, now on Vincent's pocket. Vincent wanted Santino to “make his bones” as a capo by planning and executing DiNardesi's dismissal. He then told Clemenza to arrange security issues for Santino. Neri was going to “make dissapear” the noisy reporters.
They received Augustus Corleone, who was back from a trip in Mexico. He was talking with the cartels in there about an operation from the border. Augustus came and said to Vincent, that their partners(the Alliance of Cartels)were ready to help if Vincent wanted to knock down the DiCassio threats. Vincent sended a message to his partners: he was glad that he had partners of good disposition and loyalty for their other partners.

A week later, DiNardesi was drove to the airport by a taxi driver who was going to be provided from Barzini. Little did DiNardesi know. The taxi driver was shot and replaced by a man of Santino's regime. He was drove to the airport. When he entered the jet, the doors were closed behid. From the bathroom came two men. From the cabin came Santino and two more men. The Btton Men were armed with Uzis. Santino Jr. Hid his favorite weapons under his coats: two Magnum .44
Santino Jr. Greeted DiNardesi and his three men affabily. He asked DiNardesi to surrender. DiNardesi said to his men to throw his guns. When the guns hit the floor, Santino's men opened fire, killing the bodyguards. They carefully didn't shot DiNardesi. DiNardesi was scared to death. Santino came closer to him, he hit him in the face with the muzzle of one of his Magnums. DiNardesi knelt for the pain. Santino shot DiNardesi three times in the back of the head. Then, he shot the rest randomly at DiNardesi's body. DiNardesi's head was a mess. Santino Jr. And his men escaped from the plane. The jet started his fly with the corpses.
Two hours later, the jet arrived. The pilots leaved first. They took another jet. A bomb was activated ten minutes later, destroying any evidence.

In New York, Jennings and Matthews sat on Central Park. They waited for the middle man with more money. The man, dressed in black, came. He wasn't the middle-man, but the man said that the other one had an important appointment, and he had send him, a trusted partner, to the meeting. He had the briefcase on his right hand, and his hat and a scarf in the left. The men took the briefcase. Jennings was going to shake hands with the middle-man. But the middle-man was Neri---who had been using phony credentials and name and had being using sunglasses and a false name---and the men recognised him. Too late. Neri had a 9 milimeters hid behind the hat and shot Jennings near the heart. Matthwes ran for his life, crossing the streets like a madman. But in the middle of the road, Neri pumped two shots on his back. Matthews knelt, but a big, transportation truck, crushing Matthews. Ironically, it was a Dennison Fruit Co. A branch of the Corleone exportation business.
Neri rapidly pumped another shot to Jennings, in the chest, killing him instantly. A car picked him up. Two blocks later, Neri and the men switched cars.
The police picked the bodies. In the briefcase, the founded a million dollars. All was false. Tehy founded a note inside. A car written from Leonardo Cassario, the Cuneo underboss.

One year later the war continued, until Vincent finally arranged a peace meeting with Discanio to cease fire. Vincent swore he will only bring three cars. Discanio will bring five.
The meeting will be held on Neutral Ground, near a Tattaglia night club. Discanio was in a car with his underboss. It was New Years' Eve of 1988.
Then, Discanio saw one car sop in front. Santino Jr., Armand Gacenno and two bodyguards came down. They took their guns out. Another car came, with Vincent and Neri.
The Discanio men took their guns out too. Seven men came out from three cars.
A shootout happened. Santino, Armand, Neri and five men against the other seven. Uzis, Magnums and pistols sounded in the streets. Two Discanio men tried to shoot from the cars, but were cut down within seconds.
From the dark streets, five men surrounded the two lasting cars. The other men in the cars were dead. Neri joined the new men with Uzis and opened fire. Discanio and his underboss Cassanio were dead.
But the victory was bitter for Santino Jr. Armand Gacenno and his two bodyguards---close friend of his---were dead, shot down during the first fusillade.
The DiCasso war from 1987 to 1989 ended with a terrible victory.

I e-mailed you. Oh well... Seeing as you didn't get the e-mail... for whatever reason... I'll just leave you another private message.

I e-mailed you. Oh well... Seeing as you didn't get the e-mail... for whatever reason... I'll just leave you another private message.[/b][/quote]Serious! I don't read my e-mail until Saturday or Sunday. Crap, next time I will check it out. Sorry for the disturbance Don Mikey.

P.S. I now have my AIM in my profile. I will send you another private message.

By the way I didn't explain something in ACT III.

When Vincent and the crew went at the hit to Don Dicasso, something went bad. The men were well aware on what was going to happen. The first seven men were well armed and ready. Armand and the others were cut down immediatley, and that wasn't supposed to happen. Someone inside the Family gave them a hint. But Who?

That was the best act so far but it is so hard to keep up with an outline. You should try making a screenplay or a book. That was suspensful though. That war was well written. THUG

More stuff coming!

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ACT IV: 1931

Masseria and Maranzano had been waging a war for months. Vito Corleone splits his time in managing the Family Business, conducting the Family’s army and dealing with his blood family.
All happen when Peter Clemenza was delivering his son Richard and his godson Santino at the High School gates. When Peter was leaving a fight happened. Santino was fighting verbally with Bruno Tattaglia. Bruno was the son of Philip Tattaglia, a man who had founded his Family two years ago. Prostitution and opium dealing were the main rackets. Bruno was the school’s bully and hated Santino for his strenght, thats why he beat Fredo and he and his gang of pals would disturb little Constanzia while she play with her dolls.
A building near the High School. Peter had to separate them. The fight ended there. Until afternoon.
Before the match, Peter went to Abbandando’s store, where he met Carmine Ottilio Cuneo. Clemenza remembered that two years before, Cuneo had resigned the store and joined Maranzano. Cuneo was the late Don Fannucci’s nephew. Now, he was one of Maranzano’s closest aides and lieutenants.
Santino and Bruno arranged a fight in a park. Santino was backed by Tom and Richard. Bruno was backed up by his older brother John and Davie McCluskey, son of Police Chief McCluskey.
The fight was brief.. Bruno received five or six hits on the face. John---two years older than Santino---was ready to beat John. Amazingly, Sonny give him a kick in the stomach and another in the crotch. Sonny, Tom and Richard started to run.
Philip Tattaglia went to Vito’s and accused Sonny of being a savage brute. Vito kept his cold, excusing his son’s behavior. Vito ordered Genco to bring Sonny. He wanted Sonny to excuse for his actions. But Sonny said an obscenity in English and ran from Genco’s hand. Tattaglia---pissed---said that he pissed on Vito, his family and his apologies.
Fifty men had died in the war, mostly Masseria’s men. Tattaglia was an ally to Maranzano and Emilio Barzini too. Barzini was a promising young lieutenant.
Vito had been a good military leader, providing Masseria with men. The best Corleone men that were expert in mayhem were Frank “Frankie Five Angels” Pentangeli and Moses “Brooklyn Moe” Greenebaum. The former a cool, calm man of twenty-eight. The latter, a cold-blooded, impetous young man of twenty-two.
Vito’s relations with Masseria weren’t as before. Masseria careless tactics disturbed Vito. When he heard from Genco that Masseria was losing power, Vito finally gave it up. On April, he made a deal with Maranzano. He recruited four men for the job. Two Masseria men and two Maranzano men.
Tessio invited Masseria to a restaurant, owned by a close friend of Masseria’s. For an hour, Tessio and Masseria chatted as they ate. When the other customers went out, the owner closed the place and took a walk in the beach.
Tessio and Masseria played cards. Sal excused himself to go to the bathroom. Masseria gave him permission. Tessio didn’t went to the bathroom. He went through a back door. A car picked him.
That was a signal. Two cars parked in front the restaurant. Each car had a driver and two passengers. The four passengers got down. They wore long coats and hats.
Then, they burst the restaurant, kicking the door. Masseria was chewing a large piece of bread. He recognised the men: Emilio Barzini and Ottilio Cuneo, two Maranzano lieutenants and two of Masseria’s own men: lieutenant Anthony Victor Stracci and Button Men Moses Greenebaum, who stood under the open door, grinning.
The men opened their coats. Stracci had a shotgun and Barzini, Cuneo and Greenebaum had Tommy Guns. They opened fire. When they lived, Masseria was dead, his mouth full of bread.

The next month, Vito was enjoying the peace time, when he received Filomena, a middle-aged mid-wife. Filomena---tears on her eyes---asked him for help. A huge man, Luca Brasi, had came to her because he said he had a woman ready to gave birth. Brasi ran a small crew of men who specialized in gambling and prostitution.
Filomena helped an Irish prostitute to give birth. But Brasi wanted the baby dead. He didn’t want a son with Irish blood. He said that if Filomena didn’t throw the baby on the furnace she will kill her.
Filomena ended her tale. Vito, with a comforting voice, told her that she should worry. He will help her.
Vito searched for the man, but Brasi was in jail. He had killed the Irish whore. Brasi had tried to cut his throat with a bottle and was now in the infirmiry. Vito went to Brasi, and told him that if he didn’t work for him, he would suffer something worse than the dead.
Brasi accepted. Vito talked with captain McCluskey. McCluskey agreed to leave free Brasi, because of lack of evidence. But he didn’t want Brasi into gambling, bootlegging, prostitution or other illegal business. Vito swore he wouldn’t.

Maranzano tried to kill Vito on June. He sended a letter to associate Al Capone in Chicago for help. Capone sended two of his gunmen: Tommy O’Malley and Eduardo Sallario. Vito knew of the gunmen and he send Brasi and two men, who were going to received the gunmen as Maranzano’s men. The men came and were received by Brasi. They drove them, but to the ruins of the burned Corleone storage. The two men knocked them unconscious.
When they awoke, they were tied and with twoels stuffed on their mouths. Brasi took an axe and hacked O’Malley’s feet of. Sallario screamed for minutes. When, Brasi ended the job on O’Malley, he turned to Sallario. But it wasn’t necesary. Sallario had choked with the towel and when the police founded their bodies, the towel was near Sallario’s anus.
Vito sended a letter to the Capones, saying that they didn’t had any business in a quarrel with two Sicilians.

Having the plot foiled, Maranzano decided to do a party on September. At the same time he had an appointment with David McCord, a ruthless, Irish, proffesional killer. He gave McCord 25,000 down payment and 30,000 more after the job was done. The mission? Eliminate Maranzano’s nearest lieutenants: Barzini, Tattaglia, Vito, Zalucchi, Tramonti and Capone himself.
But during the party two things happened: Maranzano declared himself capo di tutti di capi. And Vito knew of the plans to kill the lieutenants. He struck first. He ordered Rothstein and Pentangeli to organize The Death Squad to whack Maranzano. Tattaglia was going to help, becuase he knew too.
So, Tattaglia was having a meeting with Maranzano in his office. A room before, Maranzano had three bodyguards. In another room before, four other bodyguards. In the room before the office, was Marianno himself, the man who had tried to kill Vito in Nevada.
The Death Squad came: eight men: Pentangeli, the Rothsteins, Greenebaum, Gian Olaneso and two other men, all dressed as Treasury Agents armed with badges and pistols.
They arrived at the first room and out the men against the well. Olaneso and two other men putted the four men against the wall. In the other room, Sam and another guy surrounded Marriano and the other bodyguards. At the same time, Pentangeli and Greenebaum burst into the office. Tattaglia jumped over the startled Maranzano and stabbed him three times with a knife, in thechest. Pentangeli and Greenebaum took their pistols and fired four times each. Maranzano was dead on his chair.
When the men went out, they took Marriano with them. Three cars picked them.
They didn’t know that McCord had arrived at the office from the elevator, only to find his employee dead. He kept the money anyway.
The cars came to a halt. Pentangeli, Greenebaum and Marriano came out. The first two beat Marriano brutally. Pentangeli took out a garrote and choked Marriano.

Now in a conference, Vito created a new system: The Six Families were created. The Corleone Family; the Barzini Family; the Tattaglia Family; the Cuneo Family; the Stracci Family and the Anastessia Family. The Anastessias had being Masseria’s partisans, but know they had their own Family because of their abilities and cold blooded ruthleness.
A new era was going to begin.

Now I have to declare some stuff I forget to put in the Act II

*Johnny Fontane, Nino Valenti and Lucy Mancini appered in Act II, but I forgot them
In my scrrenplay, I'll mention 'em.
*I forgot to mention more scenes with Tattaglia and the rest.
* And I was going to write something that I also forgot, but I forgot it again!

Thug-I will like to write a screenplay and someday I will post a novel at the GF Fanfiction site of Don Mikey. Some day(and that day may never come) I will send it to an editorial :rolleyes:

That was really good. Act 3 is the best followed by this then 2 and 1. I liked when Sonny was in a fight when he was a kid. I like the idea of them being teenagers.

P.S. Don Giorgio Gambino I wrote some more of Guilty Conscience and it is in my url below. If you didn't read Thugs or Guilty Conscience yet click the url below in my signature.

Is there gonna be any more?

Yes, but I had a block mind. I will post as soon I write the Act V

I know what you're talking about!

hi DGG

i agree with thug, make this into a book or screenplay then it'll be better for visualization etc. im currently tryin to rite a novel myself based on the pc game mafia. i much prefer these to novels.

good outline!

mick

by the way, can sumone please define act? what is an act? i sort of know, but how do you know when an act changes in a movie?

mick

DOPE SCRIPT! I Look forward to some more!!

Finally after weeks of rest I'll post Act V!

ACT V: 1991-1992


Vincent, Victor and Frank Hagen took a trip to Russia, leaving Neri as the active Don and Santino Jr. As the head of security of the Corleone mall. Vincent was going to Russia to held a conference with the cartel associates about the latest project proposed: The Alliance wanted to use Vincent's exportation trucks, junk trucks and the boats at the New York's docks to transport cocaine and heroine. The Russian had designed the black cocaine which was undectected by the normal security machines.
When they arrived at Moscow there were the news of the destruction of the Berlin Wall. The Cold War and the Communist Block were finished and the Soviet Union too.
The meeting was held in a business building. Augustus Corleone was the host. The Russian chieftain was Nicholayev Kruschekiv. The Japanese Yakuza chief was Tarakio Yamamoto; the Mexican chief was Amador Carranza and the Colombian chief was Pedro Ramirez.
Vincent introduced his men and talked briefly. His words astounded Augustus and the Alliance.
Vincent said that he was going to retire as the Don and that his retirement was going to begin within months and he wanted to arrange his last business with the Alliance. During the last months he will provide the transportation trucks, the police protection and the dock's facilities. But that didn't satisfy the Alliance. With Vincent gone they will lose their connections in America. But Vincent gave his last word.

Meanwhile, Santino was doing his role as the security man with sucess. Until he met Alice McKelly. McKelly and Santino had met as she went in a press conference of Carlotta Corleone. McKelly wanted to talk privately with Carlota, but Santino didn't let her pass. But Santino was struck by Alice's beauty. They went out some days. Eventually, Alicia became Santino's mistress.
Santino had a good time with Alice, but he didn't knew the true: Alice McKelly was a CIA agent sent by the Department. They had known about the International Crime Alliance. They needed more information and they sent Agent McKelly on her first mission: seduce anybody who had a strong connection with the Corleone and take the information. The end of the Corleone Family was near.

The next morning, Vincent, Hagen and Rizzi went to the airport to take the next flight to New York. When they came to inspection, the dogs detected Rizzi: he had a bag of cocaine on his baggage and he was arrested until Vincent paid the surtey.
When they arrived to New York Vincent was going to enter his car but he talked with Rizzi and Hagen about who was the one who left the cocaine bag. Vincent told one of his bodyguards to start the engine. When the bodyguard did so, the car exploded.
Vincent had his men looking for suspects.

Back in the mall Vincent called a meeting with Neri, Hagen, Santino, Victor, Clemenza, Tessio and Michael Graziella, the Corleone ally in Sicily. In that meeting, Vincent announced his retirement as the Corleone Boss and his desires to leave illegitimacy. He said that Clemenza and Tessio could split from the Corleones and make their own Families. Hagen would become the Family's lawyer; Victor Rizzi will be the manager of the Villa, the Corleone's only legal casino in Vegas; Santino would become the head of security in the mall. The Corleone Family power would move on to Sicily and Michael Graziella would be the new head....the new Godfather.

Six months later, Vincent Corleone(now a legitimate businessman) was having a party in the mall. Many famous people were there and security was tight. Santino Jr. Had introduced McKelly to Vincent. Vincent was aware with McKelly's relationship with Santino, although he dissaproved of it. That night, McKelly was radiant. Then, an attraction with Vincent started, but he tried to ignore it.
For two hours, the party went well. Until a car exploded in the mall. At the same time of the explosion, several men armed to the teeth and dressed in black, shoot and bombed the mall. Neri was capable of cutting down the men. Vincent was wounded in the shoulder, but he was informed on the hospital that the men were interrogated: sure enough, Augustus Corleone had been the man behind him. Now, Augustus and the Alliance were raising hell; the other New York Families had join the Alliance and a war had ensued. All hell broke lose in that week: the few illegal remains of the Empire on the City were almost wiped out. Finally, Augustus called a private meeting with Vincent two weeks from then.

Vincent healed fast. Two days after been shot, Vincent returned home and for a week, Carlota was with him. But she had to travel to Hollywood, so she traveled five days after Vincent's healing.
Alice McKelly had been Santino's “assistant” for the past weeks. But then, she made her move at Vincent. Three days after Carlota left, McKelly became Vincent's mistress, although she didn't had enough information.
But she was getting fond with Santino and she didn't meant any harm. But her mission was first. And love needed to wait.

The meeting between Vicnent and Augustus at Mario's Cafe became historical. Augustus and Vincent talked for a time. But they didn't noticed McKelly sitting nearby. A microphone had been set on their table(they were drinking coffee outside).
But Augustus had all palnned: three snipers had been set in three different buildings, all aiming at Vincent.
The minutes passed, and Augustus gave the signal to shoot. But the snipers did not responded.
Vincent ended the meeting, with an arrangement: the Corleones were going to accept the deal with the Alliance. Their connections and trade routes were now at the hands of the Alliance.
Augustus agreed. He returned to his home at the countryside and reported to the Alliance. He was informed that the snipers had been killed in the rooftoops: Vincent had been informed.
Dissapointed, Augustus put his mind to work. He wanted the next attempt to be an effective hit for the Corleones.

Vincent's wife was filming a movie. McKelly was having her affair with Vincent and Sonny Jr. Without being aware of the dangers ahead.

***

I'll post Act VI in a couple of days.

Giorgio Luigi Gambino.

This act is one of my favorites. I won't post another act until January something. Enjoy it:

ACT VI: 1933-1937

For two years Vito had been the ruler of a peaceful Family. He celebrated Thanksgiving with his wife, seventeen-year old Sonny, fifteen-years-old Fredo, thirteen-years old Michael, ten-years-old Connie and seventeen-year-old Tom Hagen. Johnny Fontante(now in his early twenties) was singing in the party, with his friend Nno.
And the Family Line seemed to continue: Sonny seemed to be in love with a young, educated girl called Sandra. But there was a trouble: Tom was interested in Sandra too. Two men(who treated themselves as brothers)were courting the same woman. The Don sighed at this.
Two days after Thanksgiving, Peter Clemenza came to the Don and informed him that Santino had taken part of an armed robbery with two other youngsters.
The Don was angered. He asked Clemenza if Tom had taken part of the robbery. The Capo said “no”. Vito asked for Sonny.
Sonny was brought to the Don. Vito yelled him in Sicilian, cursing him. But Sonny cut him short and informed him that he knew that he had killed Fanucci. Vito was astounded by Sonny’s declaration, but then(calmly) told his son if he wanted to be a lawyer or go to college.
But Sonny said:
“No. I want to join the Family Business.” He said. Vito shook his head. Then Sonny smiled: “I can learn how to sell oil.”
Vito decided to hire him as his bodyguard so he could stick with him, so Sonny could learn about the responsibilities of being the head of the Family. He then considered Tom. He called Tessio(who was Tom’s first communion godfather)to bring Hagen in. Vito informed him that he will help him with his studies and that during the meantime, Hagen would be his secretary.
Sonny and Hagen learned about the complexity of the business with Genco.
With Clemenza, Sonny learned the use of weapons in the backyard of Clemenza’s home at the outskirts of New York. Clemenza tried to show him the use of garrote, but he was dissapointed when Sonny showed more interest in the American revolver.
Now, with Hagen as his secretary and Sonny as his bodyguard, Vito taught them the ways of the business.
And for two years, peace reigned.

But troubles started on December 1935.
The affair happened in December 17th. An Anesstessia caporegime called Antonino Anestessia, cousin to the Anestessia Don and the head of Murder Inc. The association whose members were assassins for hire(Moe Green had been a very important member) was sitting in the negotiating table with Don Corleone. Tom Hagen, Genco, Sonny and Tesio were there.
The caporegime had made a lot of noise and had pushed the Corleone territory around. The Anestessias were stupid and were backing the Irish gangs. Don Corleone was going to negotiate with Antonino. Don Corleone wanted Antonino to move his men out of Corleone territory. But Antonino was a stupid man and after eight hours of discussion Vito left the room as he said: “Nobody can reason with this fellow.”
Anestessia, however, knew that phrase was a sign that it was his last chance to negotiate. He agreed.
But one day of December, troubles started.
The Irish gangs had been quiet for the last seven years, but now their time came. They reorganized themselves and received backing from the Annestesia Family, who were starting to show signs of rebellion. The three main gangs were the Redfoot gang, the Road Goblins and the Irish Brotherhood, ruled by Muldoon Fitzpatrick, Sean O’Toole and Patrick McBurn in that order.
Within days, they started to operate gambling, prostitution, picket pocking and car stealth rackets. Their ways were violent and they defied the power of Corleone.
One day, Vito arranged a meeting with the three gangs in a special club. With him were Tessio, Clemenza, Genco, lieutenants(who acted as bodyguards) Hyman Rothstein(now calling himself Roth), Moe Green(formerly known as Moses Elias Greenebaum) and Frank Pentangeli. Also there were Hagen and Sonny.
Vito told the Irishmen that if they didn’t change their policies and manage their business with sense he would have to take action. At the other hand, if they accepted the terms they could receive great profits from their alliance with the Corleones.
But the arrogant Irish gangsters refused Corleone.
He left the building making clear that they would not tolerate no more muscle. Vito left with the rest of the Corleone men. But they were followed by an Irishman.
When Vito was ready to enter the car, the Irishman called after him. Vito turned. Then, in a flash of a second, the man took a revolver out and shot Vito one time at close-range. Vito was hit in the chest. Immediately after the shots, Sonny, Tessio, Pentangeli and Green fired their own guns. In less than ten seconds, the Irishman felt to the ground, dead, his body riddled by thirteen bullets on his stomach, chest and heart.
Immediately, Vito was taken to an hospital.
Pentangeli was sent to inform Carmella Corleone about the attempt. She readied herself and the children. She cried on her room.

Fortunately, Vito was healing, but action had to be taken. First of all, Sonny organized the men and told them about the strokes that were going to be used. He organized the regimes and created his own regime. He distributed the territories and sent messengers to the Anestessias and the Irish bosses. The old tradition of Vendetta has to be fulfilled.
As a last issue for the day, he called Luca Brasi.

24 hours later Sonny got the message. The Anestessias defied the power of Corleone and the Irish will follow. Also, he got a message from the other Families: no war will be admitted and if the Corleones went to war first, they will do anything in their hands to defeat them.
Sonny had to make great decisions.
Sonny and Genco went to the council. They discussed for some time with the other Families. They didn’t made any arrangement. Sonny declared war on Anestessia and the Irishmen. The Six Families war begun.

After three weeks in the hospital, Vito could talk some words and move his head. Sonny and the rest held councils on his room. Sonny suggested their first move: the death of Antonino Anestessia. The hot-headed caporegime had broken his word immediately after Vito’s shooting. He was positioning his men on Corleone territory.
Vito agreed by nodding.

Two days later, on January, Antonino Anestessia went to his favorite barbershop on the central area of the city. While he was shaved by the barber, Frank Pentangeli stepped in the barbershop with Sam Roth. Roth and Pentangeli took their guns and opened fire at the relaxed Antonino.
They left the scene of the crime. Anestessia was left in the floor, his white cloth covered with three spots of blood.

For a year a bloody war ensued. The newspapers were filled with stories about killings and shootings. Tattaglia had helped with men and weapns and Barzini, Cuneo and Stracci provided connection, weapons and routes.
But it was not only war out there: Sonny and Tom were still courting Sandra, but Sonny was the apparent winner. Tom loved Sandra, but he loved Sonny as a brother. And brothers were first than women.

During the meantime, Luca Brasi had played an important role in the war. He had killed and sabotaged several key figures and operations of the Anestessias. But his role developed on the spring of 1937, when most of the important movements of the Six Families War begun.
Other key member was Tom Hagen who assisted Genco. Tom had some difficulties with Sonny’s strategies but he learned from Genco about their value. Hagen provided valuable information and background. Tom Hagen, too, was shaping himself for the future.

Late in the morning Sonny received shocking information: an attempt on Vito’s life on the hospital: a man had entered the room and was ready to suffocate Vito when a nurse yelled and the police was called. No wounds had made to Vito but Sonny didn’t want to take any risks.
He sent spies to the docks and received valuable information: Four trucks loaded with cotton were going to make their way to a Irishman depot. But hid inside the cotton were several pounds of opium. Fitzpatrick and O’Toole were going to be waiting for it.
When the truck arrived the Irishmen greet it. Suddenly, three cars pulled by and started to shoot at middle street, armed with rifles and Tommy Guns. Fitzpatrick and O’Toole were among the casualties.
The truck was hijacked and the opium shipment was sent to the sea.

Another affair Sonny had t o deal with was the protection of free-lancer businessmen(such as fruit traders, store owners, barmen, etc.) who were pushed by the Anestessias and the Irishmen. For the job, he sent Luca Brasi as the enforcer of the free businessmen area. The war of the Irishmen was coming to an end.
The climax of the war happened on April: Most of the Irish Gangs chiefs were giving up. The only Irishmen left for the fight were Patrick McBurn and nine of his men(three top enforcers and six foot soldiers and bodyguards). Don Anestessia had planned a hit to Genco’s Olive Oil office and McBurn and his men were going to do the hit. The hit? Three Anestessia men were going to take over the office, while two McBurn’s men were going to take the banknotes and cash by blowing up the safe. After taking the money, the men would set the dynamite for the office.
It was early in the morning when three cars pulled by the corner and twelve men came out. McBurn, the Irishmen and the button men got out. Two bodyguards of McBurn went with the Irishmen; Two of McBurn’s enforcers covered the near buildings while McBurn, one of his enforcers and four bodyguard waited outside the building.

Inside the building, the three Anestessias and two Irishmen trapped the Genco’s workers. Genco was there too. While the Anestessias covered the workers, the Irishmen will take the banknote and install the bombs.
When the Irishmen entered the office they got a surprise: Sonny sat on his father’s chair holding a knife. One of the Irishmen tried to take his pistol, but Sonny threw his knife. The knife went straight to the Irishman’s heart. In less that five seconds the other gunman tried to shoot but Clemenza---who was hiding behind them---took a garrote out and choked the gunman to death. The deaths happened so swiftly and silently that nobody heard nothing. There was the purpose: not to scare McBurn and the rest.

Instantly after the deaths, Clemenza called six men who were hiding in the basement. They were Corlone button men and soon they covered the Anestessias without any sound.

McBurn and his five bodyguards were waiting in the street. McBurn was calm---he believed that the mission was going to be a success---when he spotted somebody standing at a far end of the street. He wore a long coat and his hat covered his eyes. The day was windy.
Then McBurn recognized the man: he was none other than Luca Brasi and as soon he figured it out he tried to shout to the two enforcers searching the buildings, but before saying something, he heard the gunfire of several Tommy Guns.
Sonny Corleone stood with a Tommy Gun at the third floor of the department buildings. He fired again and the two enforcers were killed. Sonny had slipped out of Genco’s from a back door.
McBurn felt lost. He yelled his men so they could take their guns out. They did and so McBurn. Six men stood silently in front of Brasi, who took out two Colt 1911 revolvers. For a minute they were silent before one of the Irishmen started to shoot. All started to shoot but nobody scratched Brasi. He then, let out a loud war cry as he started to run toward the men firing at him. He fired both guns simultaneously. In less than in two minutes, Luca Brasi---single handedly---had shot McBurn and his five men. Their bodies rolled by the streets and their cars, wounded to death.
The Corleone victory was a fact. But they needed one more thing.

Don Angelo Anestessia wasn’t aware from the hits yet when he and two bodyguards drove to Don Anestessia’s favorite restaurant. After eating veal and spaghetti Anestessia and his bodyguards were ready to go in the Don’s car when Luca Brasi appeared, aiming one of his Colt revolvers to Don Anestessia’s forehead. The bodyguards took their guns out, but Don Anestessia told them to calm down. He then, tried to negotiate with Brasi, telling him about the money he could made if he joined him. Brasi acted as he wanted to joined him, but then he said that he wasn’t interested in the offer and before Anestessia could reply, Brasi shot him in the forehead. Anestessia’s brains and blood went thru the hole at the window of Anestessia’s restaurant. Brasi quickly shot one of the bodyguards and wounded the other one in the shoulder. He run a couple of yards when a car picked him.

Sonny Corleone was now the youngest capo di tutti di capi of all time. He had avenged his father’s attempt and had wiped out the Irish gangs and had killed Don Anestessia. The Anestessia’s underboss, consigliere and capos surrendered themselves.
Don Corleone healed immediately and after knowing the news made peace with the chiefs of Anestessia. The other Families followed the peace issues.
Tom Hagen and Sonny Corleone had courted Sandra for two years. She liked Tom but she felt for Sonny and soon after, Sonny and Sandra were engaged. The Corleone future was brighter than ever.

There's a Ricardo topic that Ricardo didn't know about?

WOW, i'll have to read it!

I'm glad someone kept my basic Ideas alive seeing as how i havent worked on it in like 8 months!

Its interesting how Gambino interpreted my Script!

I based mine as closely to real life and the Novel as possible! Anybody who likes the Vito era i encourage you to check out my original story somewhere on this board!

You might even find my EXCLUSIVE 99% MY MIND era of the 60's and early 70's!

It involves Fidel Castro, JFK, Pentangeli's Revenge, Hagen's Death, etc.! Those EVIL Boston Dons!

Anyway, somebody took my idea on a Fan-Fiction site for Godfather! Link Please!

I finally found my Webspace YAY!

Couple things to think about.

According to Puzo, Gaetano Corleone lived in Recluse in Sicily until the 1960's, so he wouldn't be hangng out in Brooklyn with Sonny in 1920, and plus he was a couple years older than Sonny.

Crocefisso has been used in the Sicilian AND Last Don think of another name! Sanchez...lol!

I like our idea for the Vinny years!

I think the 2 Plot Movie idea has been done Perfectly already tho, so feel free to EXPAND more and make each era its own Story!

Food for Thought: Who is Don Corleone in 2003? Who did he come from? What did he do to rise to Don Corleone? What has happened to the Pentangeli Family? Fredo's Descendants? Those Rosato Brothers! What is Grace up to? She's only 50!

I read the Outlines, and will eventually read the Acts. So far, so good!
But I dont think that the Capos all have to be related to the old Capos.
I like how Al Neri is the Underboss, though.
But instead of someone like Tessio's cousin be a Capo and Tom Hagen's son be counsoler, I think there should be new characters. Just my opinion.
I cant wait to read the Acts, though.

I love it so far, any ideas on who would play these roles? (Which actors I mean)