Hey evreone after reading the other sequel here on the site so I decided to write my own this is the first chapter please honestly review. It is a sequal to the film not the book.
Chapter one 1955
Michael Corleone stood in his office and watched as his wife Kay went into the kitchen to get them both drinks. Clemenza Albert Neri and Rocco Lampone all walked in the front door, Michael walked over to Clemenza “Don Michael” he said and kissed his ring finger the ceremony was repeated by Neri and Lampone “come into my office” Michael said. They all followed him in. Al Neri, right before shutting the door saw Kay glaring at him coldly he shut and locked the door. “We have a lot to talk about so let’s get started” Michael said then he sat down behind his desk. “As you all know the move to Nevada is definite, Clemenza you were my father’s most trusted friend I want the house and all of the New York business to go to you, to start off with I will give you twenty solder’s that’s most of your own regime and some of Tessios the rest come with me.” Clemenza said “thank you Don Corleone” Michael nodded. “Neri and Rocco I want both of you to come with me to Nevada and be my new Caporegiems Neri you’ll be head of security for all the hotels Rocco I also want you to be my underboss incase anything happens to me.” They both thanked Michael. “I think that in within one year this will all be set, Clemenza closer to when I leave we’ll sign all the paper work so the house will be in your name. Until then I will need to visit Nevada regularly.” They spoke about twenty minutes longer, and then everyone left except Michael. He lit himself a cigarette and thought of his father.
Tom Hagan walked in without knocking; Michael was expecting him. “Hello Tom, how are you?” Tom replied “good thanks I got here about forty minutes ago but I didn’t want to interrupt your meeting.” Tom sat down in the seat across from Michael. “Mike I got some bad news’s to bring you I’m sorry” Michael gestured for him to go on “Kay just left with the kid’s she was hysterical and said she was going up to her parent’s house.” Michael nodded half expecting it and he lit another cigarette. “Tom I want you to go to New Hampshire tomorrow for me and talk Kay into coming back I’ll arrange the flight and everything my self, you know I would go but I have an important meeting.” Michael knew it would work out better if Tom went if he went it would just seem like begging he needed a lawyer. “Alright Mike whatever you want” he said “thanks Tom.”

Mercop, did you read the novel? That's almost exactly how it ends.

Of course I read it but this is the sequel to the movie not the novel and it's to fill in the people who havnt read the novel.

Mercop, if you read the novel, you should know that the name of Vito's youngest son is Michael, not Michel.

I really wouldn't talk to Il Padrino himself like that!!

...but I would (if I were you) work on my punctuation and English skills a bit before posting stories

The novel of course has one small part after the Hagen meeting with Kay.

Kay in church accepting of her role as wife of Don Corleone.

How about the Corleones meet the Prizzis?

Jack Nichlson, Angelica Huston, Al Pacino and Diane Keaton.

You know, as a mob movie, PRIZZI'S HONOR was forgettable, but as a straight up satirical comedy-drama, it was pretty good.

It was supposed to be a comedy... it is hilarious.