OK, calm down. You're off on the wrong foot here.

Try being a little civil to us fellow members. I don't know DonJigga but I would encourage ANY young person to try writing a story. Your criticism of his writing style was tough, but as you explained, he posted his story asking us for our feedback.

I DO know Don Cardi, and although he doesn't need anyone to speak for him, I can tell you his reply to you was addressing YOUR writing style. You're taking this to another level; one that will not be reached here.

If you have an issue with him, take it off the boards. Life is too short for this petty squabbling anyway.