And I am still banging cheerleaders Don Farti. Much better than your dates, Rosie Palmer and her five sisters.
OK, calm down. You're off on the wrong foot here.
Try being a little civil to us fellow members. I don't know DonJigga but I would encourage ANY young person to try writing a story. Your criticism of his writing style was tough, but as you explained, he posted his story asking us for our feedback.
I DO know Don Cardi, and although he doesn't need anyone to speak for him, I can tell you his reply to you was addressing YOUR writing style. You're taking this to another level; one that will not be reached here.
If you have an issue with him, take it off the boards. Life is too short for this petty squabbling anyway.