Originally Posted By: J Geoff
Originally Posted By: The Italian Stallionette
Hey, don't pick on RR. wink I like his reviews, potty mouth and all. lol

I'm just trying to encourage him to write better, and more professionally, assuming that's what he wants to do. It'd take too long to read thru them all and fix his grammar, but the language is Step #1. wink



Fuck that noise, fix the grammar but keep the style.



Long as I remember The rain been coming down.
Clouds of Mystery pouring Confusion on the ground.
Good men through the ages, Trying to find the sun;
And I wonder, Still I wonder, Who'll stop the rain.