I have no idea what he means here. I am not saying he is Shakespeare, but frankly it is not as bad as it was pointed out to be. In fact, I would challenge a lot of people to write 10 pages of play or movie script that is as readable as this. Not as easy as it appears.
Not easy, that is true. I just expect more from an English Major and a good university. But, then again, he was an English Major at a technical university.
"Patriotism is supporting your country all the time and your government when it deserves it"