I'm trying. I think I might be more of a novel writer instead of a script writer but I'm giving it a shot. I actually haved two first acts that I keep going back and forth between. I always thought Vincent was fascinated with the whole idea of being a mobster. So in one act I had the movie start with him actually conducting a ceremony for the new members of the family getting made. I think I named it This Fiery Saint. Also as a later part of the scene I had him explaining to someone te origin of the word MAFIA, you know the story of the Sicilian woman resisting the French offcier and being avenged by her fiance. In the other act I had it opening the classic way at a wedding. It would be Vincent's adopted daughter's wedding (maybe one of his brothers or sister's is dead and he adopted their girl) of course as usual favors would be asked of Vincent. Micheal would show up and ask Vincent to accompany him to the hospital to pay respects to Kay as she is dying and not expected to make it through the night ( sort of like GF 1 with Genco, the deleted scene). I haven't decided but if you got some ideas on how to link this stuff together and what sounds good please let me know.