Honestly it uses some of the same language and scenarios of the original movie. Come up with new scenarios and plots and write it in your own voice instead of trying to mimic other characters that came before them.
Make it original, make it unique, what you have now is a cheap imitation.
Thanks for the review.
A new version of ACT I is being written now, which will be different. It'll be coming this Saturday.
Bet it is.
The Mafia Is Not Primarily An Organisation Of Murderers. First And Foremost,The Mafia Is Made Up Of Thieves. It Is Driven By Greed And Controlled By Fear.
Between The Law And The Mafia, The Law Is Not The Most To Be Feared
"What if the Mafia were not an organization but a widespread Sicilian attitude of hostility towards the law?"
