Honestly it uses some of the same language and scenarios of the original movie. Come up with new scenarios and plots and write it in your own voice instead of trying to mimic other characters that came before them.
Make it original, make it unique, what you have now is a cheap imitation.
Long as I remember The rain been coming down. Clouds of Mystery pouring Confusion on the ground. Good men through the ages, Trying to find the sun; And I wonder, Still I wonder, Who'll stop the rain.
