The spelling looked OK, but you need some help with grammar and sentence structure
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Originally posted by fathersson:

So for all you newbies watch out for old Pee-Lawrence his first few post seem nice and helpful
Run on sentence
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but once the game begins he cuts sharp like a knife.
Should be sharply. Comma after sharply.
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Oh, by the way newbies, even if it sounds like I don't like Pee-Lawrence, The truth is I do, I just like to give him a taste of his own medicine.
Another run-on sentence. Period or semi-colon after "I do".
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By the way Pee- did I spell everything correct?
Should be correctly

"Difficult....not impossible"