Let me just give you a few random thoughts, im about half way thru "Walls Have Ears" and i need to write this now before i forget lol
Vito bringing XBox games? dunno, doesnt sound realistic to me, i think it would be more realistic if it was a less ranking member bringing a shit load of Xbox consoldes to try and impress Tony and the crew
and i think you should concentrate less on the whole Family storyline with Meadow and AJ, im just not into those kind of storylines
let me read the rest and ill post some more