Pretty good Capo!!

I think it would be even more interesting if Furio actually came back into the picture (unless that's forthcoming in your script). That would make for some interesting fireworks now wouldn't it?

Also, I can't picture Tony kissing Janet goodnight - maybe a hello/goodbye greeting when she's awake, but don't see where he'd be that sentimental toward her kissing her as she sleeps!!

You do seem to have the characters personalities as we know them and have provided some interesting potential storylines as well. Keep up the good work.


TIS