Originally posted by thug:
It's late. I'm tired. My brain does not process written words well but I will give you my opinion as of 4 am nov. 10, 2002. I enjoyed act 1 a lot. I thought it was well written. Act 2 was ok but was not as good as act 1. I will re-read it tommorow at a decent time to see if I can help more. THUG
Sleep Thug. Maybe Don Mikey, Pherdy and others could see this. I'm thinking about Act. III and I will post it in a couple of days.
Giorgio Luigi Gambino.
P.S. I will improve Act II if it is not so good as Act I
