I like it , perhaps you should elaborate more and expand. Sonny's potential hit would change that even Puzo had of Sonny and that certainly all Godfather fans have " a warm hearted man with a big heart for his family , who could commit murder to protect his family or his family's business with a short temper" I don't think that would be very well taken.

Furthermore would the whole movie be based around Vincent and Sonny? No emphasis on minor Characters' problems. I don't think Vincent should commit suicide though it was something Don Corleone always disapproved of like pherdy put it he would turn over in his grave " you can start acting like a man now" lol. Overall it was good just elaborate on it more and expand more on it. Over all i liked it a lot.