Pherdy...WOW!! How long have you been working on this??? And in your second language!! What about a Dutch angle?? Maybe Vincent "makes his bones" in the Amsterdam Red Light District Maybe I can help you with some of the dialogue of the Irish characters. BTW no-one in Ireland ever says "Top of the Morning"!!

Tom: "They shot Sonny on the causeway...he's dead."
Michael: "Turnbull is a good man"
Shane MacGowan: "It was Christmas Eve babe, in the drunk tank"