Cool beans. I have just completed 60 pages of the rough draft script. I'm 3/4 into the completion of the script. Here is a line from the script. This is a scene where The Gunman meets up with Ray Machowski(remember, this is a rough draft. This line might not make the final cut.):
(The Gunman walks slowly around the benches looking for Ray Machowski. After walking around each bench, The Gunman realizes that there isn't one person sitting on a bench that looks like a cop. The Gunman walks away from the benches and walks towards the bathroom area. He walks down the stairs and walks into the mens room. The Gunman walks into one of the stalls. His toilet is covered in dirty, old toilet paper and the bowl of the toilet is practically covered in violent diarreha.)
GUNMAN:Jesus Christ.
(The Gunman closes his eyes to avoid looking at the mess and covers his nose to avoid the smell. He takes a piss for about 5 seconds and walks out of the stall. He, then starts walking over to the sinks. The Gunman turns on the sink and washes his hands. He turns off the sink and dries his hands.)
RAY:Don't worry, kid. Your not the only one.
(The Gunman turns around and sees the crooked cop, Ray Machowski. Ray is between his mid-50's to mid-60's. He is wearing a gray suit and pants, with a thin black tie and black dress shoes.)
GUNMAN:The only one? Wha---
RAY:Everybody always falls for that stall the first time. I guess you could say it's a tradition around these parts.
GUNMAN:Looks like someone died in there.
RAY:I believe it was some junkie that died in there. I guess you could say that in the end, the crack killed him.(laughs)Get it?