Thanks for the criticism.

In my plot, the mob would have alot to do with the story. Prengeto and Cortovino would be the main Mob players, both of them being in their own rights Dons. The main plot would centre around Vincent, my plot although longer in exposition, is only a secondary plot with an adjustment for whats going on in DBCH's plot.

The return to Sicily by Vincent would have him finding Michael still has his hands on the strings. It also highlights how Anthony is draw into the life, inadvertently and becomes a player and personal lawyer to Vincent, assisting him in legal matters.