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BMF Series. Episode 1
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02/04/09 04:29 PM
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Title: 1990 Episode 1
A black Jeep Cherokee is parked outside a warehouse on a dark street. Spanish Louie, the driver, gets out of the jeep along with two others, Mikey and Jose. Louie opens up the back of the trunk of the jeep and goes inside the warehouse. A black man named Pernell is holding the door open for them.
Pernell- Fuckk took you so long. This shiit been here for nearly two hours man. (Smokes Cigarette cautiously and closes the door after the three men are in and he checks the street as caution).
Pernell is a 47 year old man with a medium sized black and white afro. He is a stevedore and watches the warehouse at night.
Louie- (Looks around the empty gray warehouse) So where the stuff old timer?
Pernell- (Still smoking cigarette) Where yall always got that shiit man. You know I don't ask them Nicaraguans shiit.
Louie- Come on man
(Louie's two workers Mikey and Jose follow their leader)
Louie, Mikey and Jose walk to the back of the large Manhattan warehouse. Louie is dressed in a black leather jacket, black slacks, and expensive leather shoes with a gold chain with a medallion encrusted with white diamonds. Mikey and Jose is dressed in NFL jackets, jeans, and white sneakers. Louie goes to a stack of crates and takes the top off of one. 250 kilos of cocaine are wrapped in cellophane. Louie tells Mikey and Jose to carry this out to the car. They do what he says. They then come back and get the other one with the same amount of kilograms of cocaine. Louie closes the trunk of the jeep and walks over to Pernell, who is holding the metal door to the warehouse open.
Louie-(goes in his pocket and pulls out a thick wad of money then peels off some hundreds) here man. God appreciates what you did man.
Pernell-tell Sincere I said thanks and no problem, no problem man.
Louie-you alright Pernell? You looking kinda jumpy today duke.
Pernell-(nods) i'm good young blood I gotta go. Be careful out there youngster. (Pernell slinks back inside the warehouse and closes the door)
Louie pulls up to a brownstone in a upscale Manhattan neighborhood. He beeps the horn twice. Two minutes later, a attractive white girl comes out dressed nice. Louie gets out the car.
Louie-what the fuckk Amber I called you from the payphone like three times ma. You got the keys.
Amber-Oh my God! Louie, always impatient. (digs in her jeans and tosses him a car key).
Louie instructs his two crew members to get out the car. Amber gets into the jeep with the 500 kilograms of cocaine and pulls off. Louie, Mikey, and Jose get into Amber's red Camry and follow closely behind.
Now in Bushwick, Brooklyn Louie double parks beside Amber. She gets out the jeep along with Louie and his crew.
Amber-you know the drill
Louie (shakes his head disgustingly) the money in the car Amber.
Amber-Oh okay. See you later. Call me.
Amber gets into the Camry and pulls off into the night. Louie opens the trunk of the jeep and Mikey and Jose start carrying the two crates filled with cocaine into the apartment building. Louie tells them to go the apartment while he go to use the payphone. Louie walks to the middle of the block at the payphone. The street is deserted and the winter weather is blowing against his face. He dials a number and slids a quarter in.
Louie-yeah the stuff is here. Everything is peachy.
Person on the other end-okay, okay. Make sure nothing happens to that shiit Lou. Call me when you get settled in. (The person hangs up before Louie can say bye)
Louie-(looks at phone) motherfucker
Louie is inside the apartment and Mikey and Jose are taking out the kilograms.
The apartment is nicely furnished. A good cover for a drug manufacture spot. Louie checks in the next room and the workers are ready to work their magic. Six workers, all female, unclothed in front of a long dining room table. Beside each worker was a box of Arm & Hammer baking soda, a cooking pot, and some vitamin B2. Louie places two kilos of coke on the table.
Louie-(to the workers) cook that up. make sure that shiit is grade A.
Louie is inside the furnished living room on the leather couch with Mikey and Jose. Jose is rolling up a blunt of imported hashish in cigar wrapper.
Jose-You got a light man?
Louie hands Jose a lighter out of his coat pocket.
Mikey gets up and goes to turn the music on the boom box. He sifts through the radio stations until he comes along a station playing Rick James "Mary Jane".
Mikey-This my shiit. My moms, God rest her soul, use to play this all day.
Louie smiles thinking about his deceased mother Rosa.
Jose passes Louie the blunt and Louie takes four pulls and passes it to Mikey. He is zoned. Louie starts thinking about his mother, his pregnant girlfriend Roni, and his little brother Steven who was just paralyzed last week in a drive by shooting that was meant for him.
Louie-did yall motherfucker lock the car?
Mikey and Jose look at eachother blankly. Louie shakes his head and jogs down stairs to the jeep. The jeep is still open and he locks the doors then takes the keys out the ignition.
He takes the elevator back up and tries to open the locked door.
Louie-these dick heads
He sifts through his pockets and gets the apartment keys. As he goes to put the keys in he notices how dim the hall is then it was when he left. Before he can register he feels something cold brush up against his temple. He looks to his right and sees a ski-masked man, in all black, with his hand on the trigger of a chrome .45 pistol. Then two more ski-masked men, in all black, with guns in hands appear from the staircase. The two gunmen began patting Louie down and goes inside his pockets. They relieve him of a nine millimeter handgun and two wads of money.
Gunman #1-shhhh. I don't wanna turn this into a robbery-murder. so cooperate and doc won't have to operate. iight?
Gunman #2-yeah. you bitch ass Brownsville niggas is soft.
Gunman #1-Chill the fuckk out Lee.
Lee-Fuckk you saying my name for Broadway.
Broadway-Open the fuccing door Louie.
Louie is shocked that Broadway knows his name but opens the door. Lee knocks Louie to the ground with a gunbutt to the head.
Lee and gunman #3-All you motherfucker get on the ground!
Broadway-(marches inside the room where the female drug workers are) You bitches get your asses in the living room.
The female workers follow pleading for their life and unclothed. Broadway holds them at gunpoint. Gunman #3 goes inside his black hoodie and pulls out several pairs of handcuffs and he and Lee begin cuffing the female workers. Broadway grabs the fifteen year old Mikey.
Broadway-where the fuckk is the stuff
Mikey-what stuff (Mikey is obviously nervous and sweating bullets)
Broadway-(smacks the boy with the gun and blood is dripping from his nose) i'm not asking you again
Louie-leave that kid alone! he only fifteen man
Lee-(walks over to Louie and gets in his face) he old enough to be carrying your drugs right...bitch! Mind your fuckin business nigga
Mikey-its in the backroom man.
Broadway has the boy Mikey show him at gunpoint. Broadway calls gunman #3 in the room and he pulls out a plastic garbage bag. Broadway has Mikey put the 498 kilograms of cocaine in the garbage bags and the thirty-five thousand dollars from the floor safe. The trio goes back into the living room.
Louie-you got your shiit now bounce motherfucker!!!
Broadway looks at Lee and they both grin through the masks. Lee takes his off. Gunman #3 calmly walks over to the handcuffed workers and shoots all six of them in head with one shot apiece with a sixteen shot nine millimeter, more than enough bullets for all of them.
Louie-what the fucc you doing! they innoncent man. (Louie tries to charge at Broadway and Broadway shoots him four times in the chest. Broadway drops).
Lee then pulls out his mac 10 machine gun and sprays Mikey and Jose who fall parallel.
Broadway-these niggas is dead. Lets get the fucc out of here.
Broadway, Lee, and gunman #3 rush out the apartment without closing the door and makes a clean getaway.
Louie wakes up coughing up blood and looks around the gun smoke filled apartment. The unclothed females are all dead. He looks to his right and his eyes meet Mikey's but there is no life in Mikey's. Louie crawls over to Jose who is dead.
Louie-i don't know if you can hear me but i'm going for help
Louie manages to get to his feet using the strength of a living room table. He hears the police sirens drawing close and tries to get out of the apartment. He manages to and staggers down the hall to a neighbor's apartment. He slumps his bullet-ridden body against the brown metel door twice. He hears several locks unlatching.
Gladys, a middle aged black woman with a 1970s wig opens the door.
Gladys-Boy! What done happened to your ass?!
Louie-I'm shot Gladys. I need to get in here. The police coming and...
Louie couldn't get out the words because his body lost consciousness.
Gladys-(checks Louie's pulse) Baby (she calls to someone in her apartment) come help me!
THE END
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Re: BMF Series. Episode 1
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02/08/09 09:02 AM
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Gunman #2-yeah. you bitch ass Brownsville niggas is soft. All I can say is don't show this to anyone from the Meadows estate!
Last edited by Lompac; 02/08/09 09:02 AM.
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