So far, the book really sucks. "None of the dialog is made up," sez the author. If you believe that, you believe in the Great Pumpkin and the Tooth Fairy.
TB, as I advance deeper into the book I realize that you are right. It's getting harder to read. This guy puts dialogue into quotations as if he was sitting right there when some of these 'so called' conversations and events took place! WOW!
Even the way that he describes parts of President Street past is totally inaccurate. I was very familiar with the old President street and the surrounding area, and I can tell you that this guy totally misses the mark. Maybe someone should go and tell Albert " Kid Blast" Gallo that this guy has it all wrong about the Gallos and where they once lived.
The book IS really begining to suck.